And I'd like to point out this marvelous bit of work to all amateur smutwriters as a prime example of how to write good erotica WITHOUT GETTING GRAPHIC. You don't need to launch into extensive detail about the sizes of things and what went where and how many times it happened, as so many of the PPC's... clients tend to do. It often works much better if you don't go describing things.
It's the principle of the "Boot Scene", as Star Trek loved to use.
(Also, I am much anticipating how this will affect future escapades of these two. Capital work, both of ya.)
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Date: 2009-03-16 12:56 am (UTC)It's the principle of the "Boot Scene", as Star Trek loved to use.
(Also, I am much anticipating how this will affect future escapades of these two. Capital work, both of ya.)