Yeah, I did think that scream was probably the wrong word when I used it. In case it helps, I have one sex scene where one person is totally silent and the other only makes faint gasps. Of course, he's being magically tied up, gagged and raped by a succubus, but whatever. It's a silent scene. At least until this guy's wife comes in and beats the hell out of the succubus. And let no-one say that I have sex scenes for no reason. If they're in the fic, they always serve a plot purpose that couldn't be easily done outside of the scene.

"For a start, it's actually possible..."

*sniggers* Yeah, but at least it has cunnilingus. A lot of adult fanfiction seems curiously reluctant to do that (the characters (a.k.a. author) thinking it's disgusting), but very eager to get on with fellatio.